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This is an interesting poem. Starting with the title, "Keep on walking", it has a sort of adventurous ring to it since all great adventures begin after we walk away from out normal,dreary lives into the unknown. The imagery here is very thought provoking and has a philosophical flavour to it. The lines, "I'll watch you grow butterflies.......keep the caterpillars safe" is a really thought provoking line.It might mean that as long as a person is willing to bear the storm or hardships, they will be rewarded for their toil.The second paragraph talks about how the journey can be perilous and how it can "twist your mind". Then the poem is about how unpredictable the future is but nobody can look back or fear it .The only way to go about this is to face the truth and the consequences of one's actions. The ending is very beautiful and is apt.
Maybe the poem would read better if there were a few commas added.
Overall, really nice poem! :)
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